Thursday, December 24, 2009

Not Always

Travelling in a bus, Sunitha and Vanitha were into a serious discussion. Vanitha kept repeating Whatever it is, you have committed a sin.Now you have to pay for it. Sunitha was calm and she kept saying "what is done is done and nothing can be changed.Think positively!".There is nothing positive to it. Anitha, you are in big trouble.You are gonna suffer a lot.Your entire life is destroyed. Don't be so apprehensive,its gonna bring her happiness and nothing else said Sunitha. Having a baby before marriage is to be ashamed of and there is nothing to be happy about. Vanitha stop pointing your fingers at her. It is a beautiful feeling.It just happened.Its a boon from god for their love.

Boon ha!! you serious, when she suffers, she'll get to know whether it is a boon or a bane.Stop giving out dialogues. Ok be it. It is a mistake but it was not only Anitha's fault.It is Anuj's fault too. His fault oh! but who is gonna pay?.I trust him Vanitha, he is a good man.He will not leave her.

Good man ughh,a man who can't wait till marriage. Vanitha don't be so narrow minded.It's love that brought them closer.We'll get to know whether its love or lust when she tells him she is pregnant.Why don't you understand the beauty of their love.Why blame you its not only you nobody understands.That is what even I'm saying society will not approve and she is gonna suffer.You are going back there again just stop it.She trusted him and thus gave herself completely.

All these dialogues of yours will do no good when people start questioning.When that happens she'll have to act dumb and that too all alone.Stop it Vanitha she will not be alone,he will be with her.

The bus stopped.Get down Anitha you have to meet him at 10:00 am right its already 9:50 am ,he'll be waiting.Just go tell him the good news.Ya ya tell the good news and you'll get to know how fast he can run.

Anitha reached the park.The time was already 10:05 am.He was not there.See how dedicated he is.Anitha just go and sit near that tree said Sunitha.Why are you wasting your time,he is not gonna come.I thought he will run away after listening to what you say,I was wrong,he is clever,may be he got the info well before.Vanitha how many times do I have to say this to you Please shut up said Sunitha.

Anitha your eyes are red and completely filled stop it, don't listen to this idiot, you trust him don't you?.No use in crying now I'm gonna slap you now.

"Ani he is here,"said Sunitha. Anitha couldn't even see properly with her eyes filled with tears.

"Hi dear,"said Anuj so nice to see you. I'm so irritated my boss is a complete freak that idiotic guy always finds fault with one thing or the other I don't know when he is gonna change. Anitha stood up and said Anuj I have something to say.Oh ya proceed what is it.

"I'm pregnant" Anuj was sitting on the stone seat near the tree searching for something in his bag ,he just stopped, he didnt say a word, he didnt even lift his chin. Anitha was standing right in front of Anuj.

Now she is gonna leave behind her self esteem,dignity and plead. Sunitha didn't say a word,she was more into how Anuj is gonna react.

Anuj pulled Anitha closer and gave her a tight hug giving a kiss on her midriff. Anitha couldnt stop herself anymore she just burst out crying very badly.Ani what happened.Anitha didnt reply a word she just went down and started kissing his face completely.

Sunitha just turned towards Vanitha abd said Bye dear.No no nooooo.Laughing wildly Sunitha just shot her point blank.Vanitha vanished in thin air.Sunitha smiled from ear to ear looking at their true love.Her eyes were wet .She came closer kept her hands on their head and just moved into Anitha.

At every point in life our mind plays games with us and we get stuck between the positives and negatives.Think positively as all say but

Optimism is good, not always

Pessimism is bad, not always.


  1. This story does not always have a happy ending. And the ending doesn't seem to match the moral.

    Think Negative and Act Positive. It is your actions that are going to matter and not thinking.

  2. It is absolutely true, this story does not always have positive ending yet I wanted to say not all stories have sad endings.There are some fortunate people living in this world.
    Thinking leads to actions so think right act right.Its only about her thought process I never wanted give out any moral.

  3. It was nice. I like the drama that you add to your stories.
    Keep blogging. :)