Sitting in the beach shore
gazing at the fading sun
waiting for his lady love
dreaming of the lovely dove
waves of joy from the sea
shouting out a lovely glee
pulling out the lover's heart
into the misty scenic path
out came the lady love
just to see her man's love
pumping hard in her presence
his heart felt love that instance
crazy because of the blue
the man said "I LOVE YOU"
hey................reaaly nice 1
ReplyDeleteGreat. But what happened after?
ReplyDeleteEveryone Says I Love You,
But just what they say it for I never Knew.
It's just inviting trouble for the Poor Sucker who says "I Love You".
Who was the inspiration? ;) It is very nice. I never knew you could write so well. :)
ReplyDeleteHey Harry,
ReplyDeleteOutstanding.It is very amazing. Exceeded Expectations. I can say that u are very good with words. I was able to feel the emotion as i was reading it. It really is wonderful. >:D< .Keep up the good work
:) ya who's the inspiration behind it?
ReplyDeletegood one!
Hi da..
ReplyDeleteGood one..
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Never knew that u could write so well... It was so romantic ;-)
ReplyDeleteya Finally he is romantic..!
ReplyDeleteCommo Le ME guess he must hav found Love of his life..!
Lol..;)