Thursday, October 15, 2009

I LOVE YOU

Sitting in the beach shore
       gazing at the fading sun
waiting for his lady love
      dreaming of the lovely dove
waves of joy from the sea
      shouting out a lovely glee
pulling out the lover's heart
      into the misty scenic path
out came the lady love
      just to see her man's love
pumping hard in her presence
     his heart felt love that instance
crazy because of the blue
    the man said "I LOVE YOU"

8 comments:

  1. hey................reaaly nice 1

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  2. Great. But what happened after?

    Everyone Says I Love You,
    But just what they say it for I never Knew.
    It's just inviting trouble for the Poor Sucker who says "I Love You".

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  3. Who was the inspiration? ;) It is very nice. I never knew you could write so well. :)

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  4. Hey Harry,
    Outstanding.It is very amazing. Exceeded Expectations. I can say that u are very good with words. I was able to feel the emotion as i was reading it. It really is wonderful. >:D< .Keep up the good work

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  5. :) ya who's the inspiration behind it?
    good one!

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  6. Hi da..

    Good one..
    Real love..
    check this !
    http://pendownmythought.blogspot.com

    Yours Frendly,
    Saravana Kumar M

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  7. Never knew that u could write so well... It was so romantic ;-)

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  8. ya Finally he is romantic..!
    Commo Le ME guess he must hav found Love of his life..!
    Lol..;)

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